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    dots Submission Name: "What We Send To The Edge Of The World"dots
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    Author: goveiac
    ASL Info:    30/M/Toronto
    Elite Ratio:    2.72 - 57/71/61
    Words: 167
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 195
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    dots"What We Send To The Edge Of The World"dots
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    I walked to the edge of the world today just to see how things would fall.
    When I got to what I thought was at the end of the world, I found there was no edge at all.
    What I saw was missing meaning, and lives lived not to tell.
    A private sort of misprint route, an independant hell.
    But without disgrace or ruin, I stood under my own withdrawl,
    that at the edge of this world I'm a sinking ship and not too proud to fall.
    What we send are truths, unbenounced to the rest of the world,
    of happier times with sunset rhymes and with kisses wrapped in pearls.
    What we get in return are reason blankets and a brand new mystery,
    A shaken kinda love stuffed poison drowning in the sea.
    When love has been so lucky with kisses pressed against my cheek,
    I thank God for this, the edge of my world, and what its meant to me.


    For Olivia




    Submitted on 2006-05-12 14:14:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      good [censored]. i felt what you/character felt and throughout the whole thing up till the end it didnt disapoint. cheers.
    | Posted on 2007-02-05 00:00:00 | by lark | [ Reply to This ]
      yeah, this is good. it creates a rhythm of its own as it's read.
    very sweet ~ 'kisses wrapped in pearls' ~ i love those words.
    michelle
    | Posted on 2006-12-18 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]
      this poem is very refreshing and perfect. beauty in words. I cant begin to think of ways to make it better its already perfect. This is going on my favorites list. Thank you so much for shareing.

    AL
    | Posted on 2006-05-12 00:00:00 | by Amanda Lynn | [ Reply to This ]
      aaw hun, this was sweet, its different from what we have read on this site before,

    keep em cummin

    kyrenia and shae
    x x x x
    | Posted on 2006-05-12 00:00:00 | by secret kisses | [ Reply to This ]



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