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    dots Submission Name: Inspiration from a Flowerdots
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    Author: precious_poetry
    ASL Info:    19 F TN
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 137/145/67
    Words: 159
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
    Total Views: 550
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    Description:
       I wrote this while going through the usual depression. I felt lost and alone with my family on all sides. I hope this hits home for someone. I expressed alot of loss in poems during this phase, but this one was the right one to go by. Believe in your self, and believe that everyone blossoms under the sun, and not everyone has to stay in a state of depression. Stop to look at a flower, and tell me you don't get inspired too


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    dotsInspiration from a Flowerdots
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    A flower by my window,
    Swaying in the gentle breeze,
    Soaking up the loving sun,
    And the wind rustling the trees.

    A pleasant sight when waking up.
    Like a symbol of the wanted peace.
    Slowly opening to reveal itself,
    Beautiful as its petals' size increase.

    Wonderful colors bright and tremendous.
    Aromas that can't be ignored.
    As I stare at nature's incredible creation,
    I wonder what my future has in store.

    Will I blossom and be noticed?
    What does it take to become so bright?
    Can I find what I seek in the morning's sun,
    Or am I destined to a painful blight?

    While pondering the thoughts,
    Brought on by the sight of a flower,
    I realized I have the ability to choose,
    Unlike the flower, I am full of power.

    I have the power to decide,
    What will happen throughout my days,
    I have the right to blossom,
    And be beautiful in all ways.




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      This poem i can really relate to. i myself have suffered (and still do) a lot from depression, although i have never really thought of looking at a flower for inspiration, but now i've read your poem i think i will! seems to make a lot of sense to me, and in some ways i wish i was a flower!! don't have a clue why!!
    anyway, keep up the good work :)
    x poetic harmony x
    | Posted on 2006-07-27 00:00:00 | by Poétic Harmonie | [ Reply to This ]
      I LOVE THIS POEM YOU WROTE. I love how you connect it with your feelings. and you did that very well. you will blossom , just keep believing!

    GBY!:)
    | Posted on 2006-05-28 00:00:00 | by MMISS | [ Reply to This ]
      hey hun, its secret and shae here, we both feel that everyone should read this one, its realise that life is worth living, we both dont actualy belive in depression lol, we always try to stay positive and this is a good reason to,
    keep em cumin
    kyrenia and shae
    x x x x
    | Posted on 2006-05-12 00:00:00 | by secret kisses | [ Reply to This ]


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