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Smog Blue

Author: Fraser
ASL Info:    26
Elite Ratio:    2.43 - 30 /55 /35
Words: 154
Class/Type: Lyrics /Happy
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its a song about pollution.

Smog Blue


Pollutions got me down
im searchin for an opening
i see a light through the clouds
this thing is just dragging me down

Theres smoke on my lungs
smokes on the horizon
marching to the same old beat
fallen back won't retreat


Smog Blue running through my veins
Smog Blue try and contain
Smog Blue a big powerful flame
Smog Blue it aint a fun game


Its coming from all sides
the monster has surrounded me
take this thing off its tracks
break it up send it back

Dragons breathing down my neck
smell of charcoal in my hair
singing birds cannot be heard
anywhere close to hear



running from the heat all day
can't seem to find my way
to a place where i can see
the brightness of the bay


Submitted on 2006-05-12 18:49:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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