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Author: Fraser
ASL Info:    26
Elite Ratio:    2.43 - 30 /55 /35
Words: 115
Class/Type: Lyrics /Romance
Total Views: 915
Average Vote:    2.0000
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Traveling down the subway
people sit and stare at you
traveling down that subway
i see a girl as cute as you


traveling down that subway
speeding down that hallway


Speeding down the hallway
she sits close and talks to you
speeding down that hallway
the doors are closed and she sing to me



We're together with every move
following the tracks in the grooves
we move down that path so near
moving along a hallway, clear


Moving in the tunnel
our eyes meet so secretly
moving down that tunnel
we pass gifts of pleasentry


Submitted on 2006-05-12 18:57:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I like the subway/hallway this a Gentleman's Camp song? Either way, stretch it out. I feel like you've left me hanging....what happens with the subway/hallway love?

Call me a prick, but the line: "We're together with every move, following the tracks in the grooves" might sound nice if it was "We're together with every move
following the track in every groove" or something like that, a repeat of 'every'. The groove line is missing something, and it has the potential to be the best line in the whole song....
| Posted on 2006-05-24 00:00:00 | by Corvettlaufer | [ Reply to This ]

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