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    dots Submission Name: Awaydots
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    Author: Star
    ASL Info:    15 F WI
    Elite Ratio:    2.69 - 125/127/42
    Words: 145
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 970
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       umm yea i kno it kinda doesnt flow well but tell me how you feel bout it so yeah thanks...


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    dotsAwaydots
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    She watched silently
    as the ambulance drove away
    carrying her mother from her

    She saw people looking out at her
    with worried glances
    they let the curtains fall and walked away

    No one could feel this torn up inside
    She fell to the ground with tears in her eyes
    Screaming and punching the sidewalk

    "Why?" she yelled
    Why did this happen
    "Why?"

    Her mother had choices
    and made the wrong one
    Which left her to fight with no one

    Yelling and screaming echoed in her head
    A slap across the face then nothing
    She had looked over to see her mother had fallen

    No movement
    silence
    Echos

    She moved closer and
    as she did she wiped the blood off her lip
    shaking her mother with no avail

    Mother?
    MOTHER
    gone away like everyone else




    Submitted on 2006-05-13 01:52:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I'm afraid of losing my mom so I could see this happening to me. The feeling of responseability and abandonment flooded over me. I scared me and open my eyes a bit more.
    *~Courtney~*
    | Posted on 2006-05-15 00:00:00 | by mcknight92 | [ Reply to This ]


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