Somewhere I know there is a place where my soul can breathe
over me... i know... that there is noplace for me to go
*Chorus*- Someplace where I can breathe.. freely now.. so insecure.. I know you are the pne for me.. the one I need.. to go someplace where I can breathe...
alone at night.. when everyone's asleep.. I dream of you.. but I know you don't dream------- of me
Repeat chorus
so how can I stay up.. or even sleep.. I can't breathe----- I can't think..
think of someone like you.. ever being with someone like me....
I disagree somewhat with Akili, I've seen short songs such as this, it all depends on the music that will go along with the lyrics to make it seem longer. One part I do agree with is your spelling, you really need to look over all of that.
It's a beautiful song, really. I never could make music from my words.
Well, this is to short for a song and I think you really must work on your spelling. Also, it doesn't seem to flow as a song would. And it kinda sucks in the fact that it doesn't really seem to be anything. Maybe the start of a song, but one that hasn't grown yet.
Submission Name: Somwwhere
