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Heart And Soul


Author: LadyMustang
ASL Info:    42, female, West Virginia
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Words: 210
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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True love from the heart and soul


Heart And Soul



Heart And Soul

Heart and soul our love is meant
To be, God joined us together so
Our spirits could fly free.

Heart and soul this circle we make,
Is our destiny no mistake. We shared
Our lives for many years,Made each
Other shed many tears.

Now we are together once more God's
Given to us another chance to make our
Love much stronger than before.

Shall we love in his guidence from above,
To forever be joined my darling in our
Eternal love. He gave us his blessing with
His heart and soul, So together our hearts
Would forever be whole.

As we stand here before God and everyone
We know to promise our vow to each other,
I know we were meant to be for each of us
no true love could ever be another.

He created me for you and you for me, He
Gave to us the eternal flame to burn forever
As true love was meant to be. It is within our hearts
to control, To love one another Heart and Soul

Written By: Ladymustang




Submitted on 2006-05-13 15:40:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  another beatiful and very touching poem..good job..i really do enjoy your writings..they touch my heart..good read..
| Posted on 2006-10-29 00:00:00 | by DeathsWife | [ Reply to This ]
  Goodness this is an awsomely beautiful poem of a couples love for each other . One thing I especially liked about it was the way that you included God in the scene of the relationship.


Shall we love in his guidence from above,
To forever be joined my darling in our
Eternal love. He gave us his blessing with
His heart and soul, So together our hearts
Would forever be whole.

This was a beautiful stanza it is a beautiful way to say wait for marriage. Hope you can comment some of my newer stuff soon.

much LOVE
James
| Posted on 2006-08-01 00:00:00 | by James Reyna | [ Reply to This ]
  First off, this made me smile inside first...then on the outside, heart and soul this circle we make...depicting the true path of that true love always seems to take.
Secondly you just don't paint it as perfect...showing for all to see that it is a struggle...the sheding of tears...speaks this...true love is about two overcoming all as one...this is something I have always believed in.
The wording thoughout paints a mental scene of destiny fulfilled...from the use of spirits set free...soul....to usage of eternal flame burning forever...heart...this works wording speaks the true test...obviously written from the heart to the one whom holds in the hands...your heart.
The closing lines..though simple...have a profound meaning..."it is within our hearts to control"..to love one another...
The choice is always between the two in true love...it is a choice I feel has to be made together...a choice of one.
~Alan
| Posted on 2006-05-14 00:00:00 | by MidnghtScorpion | [ Reply to This ]
  wow..this was truly beautiful...I read it as if it was my life a few years down the road...and the kind of love...the depth of love described in your poem...is what I want. I liked how at the beginning..you made it sound as if the couple had been through so much..but found help and guidance through God and made it to the point they are now. True love makes me smile to begin with..but this definitely brought a smile to my face. Thank you...great write. ~hailie~
| Posted on 2006-05-13 00:00:00 | by loveispain | [ Reply to This ]
  This is really beautiful
I can definately feel the Love you and Your Soulmate share
I also liked how you kept referring back to God almost as if Thanking him for bringing you two together
That for me is what made this write complete
Excellent Job
God Bless
Ron

Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
Thank You
Ron
| Posted on 2006-05-13 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
  A touching ang lovely write written from your heart and soul.

I think your description here reflects what everyone strives for - a real true romantic and everlasting love.

Great job Wilma.

Frank.
| Posted on 2006-08-27 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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