As Soon As You Try You Lose
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it's mostly about where we are headed. it seems like a lot of information is lost on my generation, atleast that's how i've always felt ever since highschool. It's like nobody acts responsible because we're not treated like we should be responsible, and how can we because everything is so fucked up already... the only jobs most people my age can land are shit ass mcdonalds-esque jobs, and this is in the big cities. It's like our future seems so fucked or something, that most of them just prefer to stay dumbed down and stupid. and of course, no matter how smart you are, everyone just expects you to be this dipshit youngster that doesn't know anything. No matter how much you prove yourself worthy.
As Soon As You Try You Lose
words build up behind swelling eyes and the tears mark the drapery of passing ties they will dry up soon under a silkroad sun and the world will go back to it's vicious run in all the chills of craving more the people never listen to forgotten lore and sun is shone into the night but the moon is blocked by smog and light compared to stables, arches bare the forgotten future we all will share and climb the willow as she sleeps and ask it's branches why she weeps the dunes in deserts will burn barefeet and cook the toes like tastless meat below the shadows long and strong dig yourself below until the days are gone |
Submitted on 2006-05-14 03:59:30 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| what does that have to do with my poem???? moron. | Posted on 2006-05-14 00:00:00 | by mrmundane | [ Reply to This ] | Yeah, i can relate... when we're young people think we're stupid but as we get older they find out we aren't so dumb afterall. I know about the fast food jobs too, I've worked at McDonalds and Wendys. | You're still growing up so give it time... I'm 30, lets see how you feel at my age. | Posted on 2006-05-14 00:00:00 | by psycho_1 | [ Reply to This ] | |
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