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    dots Submission Name: Unspeakable Vowdots
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    Author: lolavie
    ASL Info:    23/female/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 70/175/103
    Words: 198
    Class/Type: Personal Quotes/Love
    Total Views: 666
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1189



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       Maybe someday I can recite this for you, Addie.


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    dotsUnspeakable Vowdots
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    You are strong with me

    Forever fallen in my soul

    Stuck we are and glued

    we shall stay in our love



    Annually celbrating unto you

    what blessings youve

    laid upon me alone

    The stress you took away



    Only you have been

    considerate in ways

    no one else have

    Unto me, unto you



    Til the end of veryhting

    we go somewhere

    where only we can exist

    we only we can become one



    Promises bestowed upon us

    Loyalty beyond comprehension

    Honesty beyound imagination

    Respect beyond ability



    Aiming for happiness

    Shameless Ill be for you

    Pain I'll help you through

    Gaining everything we never had



    So now I vow

    Unto the man I love

    We go on now

    Somewhere only we know




    Submitted on 2006-05-14 11:11:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is an extraordinary piece of art you have, and I seriously think that its good, maybe the spacing is too big tho, and the unspeakable vow you did touched me, it came to get me, so clocse that i know your vow is strong even tho i dont know what it is, and I think that it's great, everyone should do vows, and its like an engagement, but i hate religious things, so thas why a vow is personal and secret, and powerful, but yet un-religious and thats whats great about it, so i hope it will last forever, and that it'll stand strong even tho the harsh storms that can happen, so i wish you luck, and have a wonderful life, and i hope to see you on ES!


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    | Posted on 2006-06-16 00:00:00 | by Wolfeye_666 | [ Reply to This ]


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