within something grows
growing
in infinite space
eternal felt
floating
past father Mars
mother Venus
inside a flesh made case
forming
a mind
and eyes
to question what it sees
and seems to be
why me?
what does it all mean?
a voice will someday express
with lips
that kiss
while hands caress
and bodies collide
perpetuating
the cycle
that cycles
through infinity
from beginning
to the end
back again
it is you
it is me
our past
future
and our inbetween
joy and pain
dark and light
never wrong
always right
it is life
that will someday
see and be seen
for that
i thank you
woman
my Queen.
Kinda lost track for a moment there but the poem is actually pretty amazing The last part of the poem held me in a grip so I read it and enjoyed it to the finish.
fast paced, catchy, not too simple to lose interest in and not too complex to go over our heads. Every line ties into the next and from that flows a great poem. Good work!
Submission Name: Life
but the poem is actually pretty amazing 
The last part of the poem held me in a grip so I read it and enjoyed it to the finish.