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Author: Nessus Elite Ratio:    2.44 - 3 /10 /6 Words: 102

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you cut me open with a knife you dont know your holding i want to fight back but dont for fears that you assisted in molding i can hardly feel the strength of my conviction because in sitting dormate i am in constant contradiction my heart has died crushed by people i love by vicious xcorns that they do not know they are making i am sick of hiding sick of waiting for you to change i am done i will not wait any longer here i am here i stand and i am not moving for anyone

Submitted on 2006-05-14 15:21:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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yeah what is xcorn? but other then that i liked it and i also liked your pic as well i really like this quatrain i can hardly feel the strength of my conviction because in sitting dormate i am in constant contradiction i love it keep up the good work darcey

| Posted on 2006-05-14 00:00:00 | by Darcey D | [ Reply to This ]

What is an xcorn? This is a good poem and I like your pic! Keep on writing!

| Posted on 2006-05-14 00:00:00 | by psycho_1 | [ Reply to This ]

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