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    dots Submission Name: Philosophy of Lonelinessdots
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    Author: noone important
    ASL Info:    19/m/ca
    Elite Ratio:    2.99 - 17/28/8
    Words: 176
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Depressed
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    dotsPhilosophy of Lonelinessdots
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    Do you ever get the feeling that no one really cares about you, that they're just there to use you and be done with it? Have you ever burned with the feeling that your hated and should just sit back and wait for your turn to die? Do you ever just take the knife to test it's edge on your skin, to know the little bit of difference it would make to just press harder than you really were? I am an insignificant man, nothing so impacting on the world as to say "If I'm gone things would seem changed." I speak the words, I know the truth, but not even the truth cares to notice me. I'm lost in a world of forgotten misery where people point and laugh and then forget they ever saw me. I am faith, I am hope, I am strength, and I am lost. I hide in my box to spare the world it's biggest failure, to keep it safeguard from the focus that is a lost and unwanted life.




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      WELL IN MY HUMBLE OPINION I BELIEVE THAT GOD HAS NEVER MADE A MISTAKE. AND YOU CERTAINLY ARE NO MISTAKE. JUST A SOMEWHAT CONFUSED MAYBE. BUT WE ALL DO GO THROUGH TIMES AND THOUGHTS AS THESE. NEVER GIVE UP BECAUSE GOD WON'T.
    GBY!
    | Posted on 2006-05-15 00:00:00 | by MMISS | [ Reply to This ]
      a lot of people feel this way, you are not alone! it's what you do about it that matters. you can keep getting kicked in the teeth by life and end up ruined by the misery of others or you can get up and fight for your life!!! so get up!! and make today the first day of the rest of your life!! forget about yesterday cuz yesterday's left behind. nobody's gonna make it easy for you so remember, if it's not worth fighting for, it's not worth having. all this reminds me of something i once heard that i think Jesus said and it goes something like this: "come to me, all you who are weary and burdened and i will give you rest". i hope you find rest and relief from what you've been through...peace, be still...
    | Posted on 2006-05-15 00:00:00 | by scissorhands | [ Reply to This ]
      At soem points in time I feel the same way, only when I feel like sad. But I think that it would have made a nice journal entry.
    | Posted on 2006-05-15 00:00:00 | by SavedDragon | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh my gosh, I can totally relate to what you've written here; it's almost as if you've read my mind and seen how I feel every day. I am sorry you feel this way though but I do understand it...
    | Posted on 2006-05-15 00:00:00 | by psycho_1 | [ Reply to This ]
      This would be better if it was easy to read. You make if flow in a jumbled write. If u gave it structure it could be magnificent! And you will come to realize dear writer that everyone feels this way at some point in there life time. some are just more susceptible to feel it than others.... Anywayz, its a decent write... peace-
    | Posted on 2006-05-15 00:00:00 | by night_angel | [ Reply to This ]



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