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    Author: wasif
    ASL Info:    18/m/Delhi
    Elite Ratio:    3.21 - 47/42/16
    Words: 177
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 1111
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 694



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    Follow not to a hill,
    Where your eyes are blackened
    by the height of which,
    You like in sky- false touch.
    Wherein You misspell “Perseverance”
    And feet a mile above fly.
    Like a God You dictate-
    the more blind men You see,
    and dig beside your grave, theirs too.
    Feel like You’ve never felt,
    for it’s an apogee – False.
    Nor a dream gains a virtual dimension,
    nor to You, Truth is clear-
    And as You’re wandering like You’ve never done;
    I’ll truly pray…
    That You wake up this Nightmare…






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