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    dots Submission Name: Dear Me,dots
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    Author: Silent_Tears
    ASL Info:    16/f/BC
    Elite Ratio:    2.13 - 90/111/59
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
    Total Views: 324
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    dotsDear Me,dots
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    How can you allow yourself,
    To be attacked daily

    Let everything run off you,
    Like oil and water?

    What happened to the personality within,
    The spirit, the talent, the truth?

    The shell needs to be cracked,
    The cover needs to be blown

    Stop hiding behind the words of others,
    "Stick and stones can breack my bones"
    "But names will never hurt me"

    Let the crowd know you are there,
    Let them wonder what happened

    "What happened to the quiet girl,"
    "The one we could walk all over?"

    Dive down deep,
    Find the girl within the lies




    Submitted on 2006-05-16 10:20:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Finding one's inner self which will lead to self realisation and acceptance. I liked the idea.
    Good write, oh and love the title too.

    Be happy

    Jason
    | Posted on 2006-06-14 00:00:00 | by Departed One | [ Reply to This ]



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