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    dots Submission Name: Surrender to the Powerdots
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    Author: Psychohenry32
    ASL Info:    1638/Femail/USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.33 - 22/33/24
    Words: 42
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 109
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 272



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    dotsSurrender to the Powerdots
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    I love you
    All he said
    My one true fear
    Come to life
    Not that he loves me
    Rather
    I love him back
    Surrendered to the power
    Break my heart
    OR
    Make my heart smile forever
    No longer my sole decision




    Submitted on 2006-05-16 12:49:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      im sorry i dont like to give feedback thats not positive but my attention was grabbed at the begining but as it went on i kind of got lost.
    But as i always say "A poems meaning isn't meant for the reader but rather for the author."
    | Posted on 2006-05-16 00:00:00 | by luvneverreturnd | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this poem its odd but i like it.
    but i dont really think its happy. its more of a quite realization that you've made or acknowledged the love and you may get hurt from it.
    i really like it its relateable and pure.
    | Posted on 2006-05-16 00:00:00 | by emb_er77 | [ Reply to This ]



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