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    dots Submission Name: Down Againdots
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    Author: Psychohenry32
    ASL Info:    1638/Femail/USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.33 - 22/33/24
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 154
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 617



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    dotsDown Againdots
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    Painful episodes
    Searing of the skin
    No one to understand
    Everything in code
    Try to steal a win
    And all the worms are canned
    Carying this heavy load
    The heart is in for another spin

    Nothing to loose
    This path I choose
    Lost in thought
    Maybe I'll get caught
    Surrounded by fear
    Our minds are wrought
    With devient thought

    Does anybody know?
    Does anybody care?
    Dangerous intentions
    Lost in shaddows
    Shrowded in mystery
    Turn to shreds
    Everything is still




    Submitted on 2006-05-16 12:54:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Know that i can to relate to what this is talking bout whether you feel this way or not.
    Anyways this piece is really good.
    | Posted on 2006-05-16 00:00:00 | by luvneverreturnd | [ Reply to This ]
      
    This piece definitely sounds like a cry for help. Someone so damaged by failed trust that they think darkness is the only answer. My son used to write like this so I feel your pain. Keep pouring it out. It's cathartic.
    | Posted on 2006-05-16 00:00:00 | by optomistic | [ Reply to This ]



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