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    dots Submission Name: !..I AM CONVINCED..!dots
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    Author: AfricanPrincess
    ASL Info:    21/F/SA
    Elite Ratio:    4.2 - 222/201/31
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 1200
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    Description:
       ...Just one of those moments when life is ....

    If u'v ever felt this way plzzzz let me no!


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    dots!..I AM CONVINCED..!dots
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    I am convinced
    Not by my mother
    Not by my mentor
    Not by government
    Not by religion

    I am convinced
    By the feeling of connectedness
    By the longing for oneness
    By the fire that burns within my spirit
    By the yearning for understanding of all souls

    I am convinced
    And it increases with awareness
    And it swells with consciousness
    And it grows with each person entering my life
    And it multiples with all the beauty I see

    I am convinced
    More than I've ever been
    That I possess a powerful soul
    That has lived numerous lifetimes
    That learnt valuable lessons by experience
    And this time round has come to serve a great purpose




    Submitted on 2006-05-16 14:55:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This one Is Fantastic
    I agree with everything you have said except I respectivelly disagree with the past life feelings
    I too believe I am on a path and nothing will stop me from reaching out to those in need letting them know there is hope in the world and I for one do care how they feel
    Excellent Job with this one
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-05-16 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      You know, the first step on the final stages of developement to the state of perfection is to actually realize that you're on that path.

    I think you're on the way, kiddo, enjoy the ride, it'll be a great view from the top!

    be happy

    Graeme
    | Posted on 2006-05-16 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
      I don't believe in reincarnation... I just believe that every new soul is born with the knowledge of it's ancestors and this makes it powerful. We have to learn to read and listen to our soul to become powerful in our lifetime.

    I like the structure of your poem. It is very well written.

    Sad Lion
    | Posted on 2006-05-16 00:00:00 | by Sad Lion | [ Reply to This ]
      This was very strongly worded and it conveyed the depht of your conviction that is a rebirth of one's soul from throughout life. I believe it is possible, and hope that I'm doing all I can to make a difference in this lifetime. I liked the opening lines, you listed the sources that can sway our thinking the most and declared that not even those can tell you differently or anything you don't already know in your gut. This was very good.

    Catrina
    | Posted on 2006-05-16 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]


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