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    dots Submission Name: speechless.dots
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    Author: lovefatal
    Elite Ratio:    2.91 - 22/38/19
    Words: 175
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    he came up to me with his conspirator's smile, about to share the day's frustration.

    he leans against the windows, "so did i tell you i'm planning to bomb my doctors office?"

    i laughed, "nope."

    he kept his smile, "remember the other day i said i had some tests done? well last night the doctor calls - & i miss it. i call back, at most, two minutes later & the secretary's like, "we're closed. call back during business hours." & i'm like,

    "that bastard didnt call me back during business hours. look,

    you're closed? you're in the building. i know my file's around there somewhere. i'm pretty sure

    i have cancer, but if you could just verify that, that would be great."

    & he smiled at me like, "life's a bitch, we know, but we're the kind of people that can laugh about it."

    & for the first time in two years, he didnt make me smile.




    Submitted on 2006-05-16 21:04:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really like this one. The ending is not what I expected. Nice.
    | Posted on 2007-03-13 00:00:00 | by SilentDreams42 | [ Reply to This ]
      So how much of your writing is from life and how much is from somewhere else?(it's all from life but how much is autobiographical), the reason i ask is because your writing seems so real. This is a conversation that I would dread having, but it seems like the way i would have it. Well I don't think I would change anything in this one either. That's all i have to say about that.
    | Posted on 2006-06-11 00:00:00 | by graeme | [ Reply to This ]



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