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    dots Submission Name: Placiditydots
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    Author: snufthepunk28
    ASL Info:    21/f/ak
    Elite Ratio:    4.5 - 244/178/68
    Words: 49
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsPlaciditydots
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    Pouring out amorousness into emptiness, these spikes slither to placidity
    Singing to the pond you just drowned in, touch the water and feel your lips.
    Ripples are baseless, pathetic and feel not.
    Around the sun shins, yet the warmth has not existed.
    Espy annihilation.
    Undividedness is perfect.




    Submitted on 2006-05-16 23:57:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I believe in this write you are speaking of One who is trying to Help another move forward in Life but they are always turned away with their advice
    I for one have experienced this numerous times but I can tell you
    Never Give Up in Trying to Help Another
    Though they may not show it your words of advice have definately sunken in
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-05-17 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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