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    dots Submission Name: Life is beautifuldots

    Author: shivalikathuria
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    dotsLife is beautifuldots

    Life is beautiful

    Every thought that weighs my mind
    Moving forward and getting rewind
    Wanted to tell me again and again
    Sometimes ugly, sometimes cruel
    But life is still beautiful.

    All the time I made a complain
    I crimped, I grumbled
    But never took any pain
    Today I realize, I have much more
    Enough to keep me happy then why did I always sore

    I never accepted my mistakes
    Always tried to find an escape
    Gave myself a simple excuse
    Luck is hard and life is a tough cruise

    Today I want to make a new start
    Making my weakness and strengths apart
    It may take time to reach my goal
    To enrich this incomplete soul
    But I can do it, as my body is whole

    I am thankful to God
    For he gave me this life
    Two hands and a vision in eyes
    I have always looked down upon it
    But now I realize that Life is beautiful.

    Submitted on 2006-05-17 02:45:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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