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    dots Submission Name: Winterdots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 37
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsWinterdots
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    In winter the world is a blank page:
    the ground is white,
    the sky sunless and gray.
    Gradations of empty color,
    layers of nothing one atop another;
    a season as empty as my soul.






    Submitted on 2004-01-23 15:03:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      AND NO-ONE REMEMBERS TO VOTE! UGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <><
    | Posted on 2004-03-21 00:00:00 | by WorththeWait | [ Reply to This ]
      nice read, lot of meaninig and feeling in just a few lines
    | Posted on 2004-01-24 00:00:00 | by brokenbatman | [ Reply to This ]
      somedays i feel the same way. winter, i hate it. i live in canada and it seems like for six months it steals my breath unknowingly. i hate that noise under my shoes from the snow when it's so cold. the piercing squeek that only special dogs should be able to hear. winter is a dirty sorrow.

    ghost.
    | Posted on 2004-01-23 00:00:00 | by myghostsliketotravel | [ Reply to This ]
      How amazing you are. Your soul speaks volumes in merely seconds. Nothing empty there.
    | Posted on 2004-01-23 00:00:00 | by kblyric | [ Reply to This ]


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