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    dots Submission Name: Thoughts Of An Angeldots
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    Author: kession
    ASL Info:    18~M~ok
    Elite Ratio:    3.19 - 113/146/57
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsThoughts Of An Angeldots
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    I sit back and think,
    About her all the time,
    I wonder if she's happy,
    Or if she's up there crying.

    I wonder if she sees us,
    Her family and friends,
    Or does she sit alone,
    And constantly pretend?

    When she got in that car,
    I wonder if she knew,
    That she'd never come home again,
    Or see me and you?

    Did she know it was her time,
    Was she taken too soon,
    Was she scared to go,
    Did she know what to do?

    No matter what happened,
    Or all the things she had done,
    She'll always be remembered,
    And she'll always be loved.




    Submitted on 2006-05-18 01:20:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      awwww this was really sweet and I'm sure it has a lot of emotion and meaning that I'm not totally getting just because I don't know the person it was written for or the circumstances but this makes me wonder the more typical things someone would probably think will reading this; a.) was she killed by a drunk driver? (b.) was SHE a drunk driver? (less likely but all of us make bad choices sometimes) or (c.) was it some semi-random accident? but either way I think this was a really sweet tribute to her, it crossed my mind that maybe there never was a her, maybe she was just a symbolic concept for you but since I don't know well enough to say, and I don't want to insult anyone I'll just leave at I thought this was a really sweet write.
    peace,
    ~jess
    | Posted on 2006-07-17 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ]



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