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    dots Submission Name: I'll Always Rememberdots
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    Author: kession
    ASL Info:    18~M~ok
    Elite Ratio:    3.19 - 113/146/57
    Words: 144
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 151
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 930



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    dotsI'll Always Rememberdots
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    I remember looking,
    into your big beautiful eyes,
    and our first kiss in front of everyone,
    much to your surprise.

    I remember the first time,
    I went to your house,
    I remember holding you,
    as we sat on your couch.

    I remember the time,
    you laid your head in my lap,
    and the way you always knew,
    how to make me laugh.

    I remember holding you,
    whenever you cried,
    and how you wiped away,
    the tears from your eye.

    I remember the time,
    you said you needed a friend,
    you had me to come over at 3 am.

    You gave me the chance to do,
    anything I wanted,
    but I backed away,
    because I wanted it to mean something.

    We were good friends,
    and I hope we still are,
    and I'll always remember,
    the times that are ours.




    Submitted on 2006-05-18 01:25:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      ok so now u probly hate me by now. but i dont hate your poems. lol. i just love to help ppl. so dont take it the wrong way. there is also a lot a repetition here as in i remember i remember. but u do good
    | Posted on 2006-07-30 00:00:00 | by butterflygirl27 | [ Reply to This ]
      awwww this was such a sweet write and definatly shows a more selfless side of you, that just, dude even if you actually did it or not you definatly have my respect for being able to make that point, and still the write sounded awesome, loved it
    take care,
    ~jess
    | Posted on 2006-07-07 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ]



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