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    dots Submission Name: Just Let Me Crydots
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    Author: Sun Spots
    ASL Info:    99/ sex yes please/ HeLL
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 36/70/36
    Words: 506
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 657
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       Have you ever felt so hurt that you want to cry out your little eyes off? And your friends and family wanted to cheer you up and make it all better But you wanted to cry and lament and drain your sorrow and tears out within you Well this basically the theme or main concept to this piece of I wrote


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    Some much emptiness consumes
    This area where we stand
    Yet so much love hung inside my heart
    Each beat filled with sweetness and deep passion

    My eyes Illuminate like bright stars
    When your presence is near
    And I cry a sentimental tear in silence
    When youíre in pain and fear
    But with my care and love
    It all disappears, all of sudden
    You begin Smile and all again is clear

    You fly with me while asleep
    To the stars, to the moon
    To high mountains
    To places you never stood before
    Yet your eyes misguide you
    And you cannot see clear

    I take your hand
    Place it within my chest
    And tell you, ďLet me love you, and let me open my arms to youĒ
    Yet you donít stand beside me
    And depart staring at me with disbelief
    Nothing but grief encompasses my presence and life

    That night while you were sleeping!
    I looked out the windowpane
    And while your star still flickered
    I looked up upon it
    And like a little kid
    I ask for three wishes
    But I must be strong, understanding and true to life
    Because this is no fairly tale nor a movie
    But for just once I wish it were!!
    Oh Oh Oh

    Some much emptiness expresses this room
    So much passion hung on these walls
    So much sweetness and love fallen and lost
    Amidst the air among the stars and clouds
    Nostalgic moments tossed and lost in time
    Tears lost in raindrops forever fallen and not capture
    Our love and passion still salvage
    And capture by stars, clouds and air
    Breezes seem to capture this sound
    Yet not graspable; lost But not forgotten

    Impossible silence encompasses this room
    Where you once stood


    With a tear of yours in a tear of mine
    I begin to cry

    Please I donít need any Consolation
    Nor gifts or words of wisdom
    To help me forget about this situation
    Just let me cry
    Just let me cry
    I want to cry for her
    Please just let me cry
    Soon sadness with be drain out of me

    Ohhhhhhh Ohhhh

    Just let cry, Let me cry
    Soon the tears will be clear
    And the smile that lost his cheer
    With emerge with laughter
    And the pain that was here
    Will be a memory forgotten and dear
    For the present time
    Just let me cry ohhhhh let me cry
    Let me cry, ohhh how I wanna cry
    And drain my tears

    Let me cry, Let me cry for her
    Ohh please let me cry


    Soon you would understand
    What I mean by shedding a tear of yours
    In a tear of mine my love and when itís
    All evident and clear
    My heart will not longer be here
    And you will cry for me like I once cried for you
    A tear of mine in a tear of yours




    Much love,
    Gerri




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