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    dots Submission Name: The Great Depressiondots
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    Author: WhErEaMi
    ASL Info:    16/f/nc
    Elite Ratio:    2.95 - 35/38/24
    Words: 252
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsThe Great Depressiondots
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    There are billions of people in the world, yet I feel like I'm alone
    And all I try to do is right, but everyone seems to treat me wrong
    So I lash out in rage, but what I say is never heard
    Because I've learned to turn my cheek and swallow all these hateful words
    But I'm getting tired now and I can only take so much
    Because with everything that happens my soul is slowly being touched
    So I make others laugh just to escape all my pain
    But every time I'm down no one's there to do the same
    So I sit back and relax, while I nurse all my wounds
    As I lay terribly depressed in a dark solemn room
    Somehow this little balled up aggression
    Is slowly changing into an even bigger depression
    Something I can't take and can't shake
    And eats away with every second
    I've now acquired too many emotions to ever explain
    It feels like there's demons as well as angels fighting for control of my pain
    And for some strange reason my heart is being pulled in opposite directions
    One has the side of good and the other knows no affection
    And I can't explain the way I feel, I just know I feel this way
    From the second that I wake, till the time I end my day
    Although I enjoy life and try my best to learn it's lessons
    I just wish someone could teach me to escape this Great Depression




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