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    dots Submission Name: Hidedots
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    Author: Lavender
    ASL Info:    20/F/USA
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 101/125/59
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
    Total Views: 1448
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 525



    Description:
       umm.... random thoughts??


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    dotsHidedots
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    Run, run, get away
    Hope it won't come back
    Hide from yesterday
    Let the mind go black

    Erase all the memories
    Get rid of all of this pain
    All of this is not to please
    From this, there's nothing to gain

    So run and hide
    Try not to see
    It isn't fine
    Get away, leave

    Go hide from your past
    You've died long ago
    Your future won't last
    So no one will know






    Submitted on 2006-05-18 09:01:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      hey thanks for the comment. It really meant a lot.

    Anyway, I like what you've written here. I feel that way sometimes too, but I always tell myself that the next day will come, and it can be the best day of your life, so i guess it's up to you to decide how your day, or your future will be.

    Loved reading your piece!
    | Posted on 2006-05-18 00:00:00 | by arianers | [ Reply to This ]
      this was interesting the title caught my eye
    if it were only that easy to take a space where no one could find you

    well done and enjoyable to read

    sandman
    | Posted on 2006-05-18 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]


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