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    dots Submission Name: Raindots
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    Author: crimsonfairy
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 152
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Wings what wings?
    For I have been stricken down; disowned
    On this forsaken land
    Of the heartless

    What stops the tears to flow?
    Insecurity; no
    Love; never
    Pity upon thy self; no

    What causes such pain?
    Such weakness
    Myself; it’s always myself
    My doubt, my lack of courage
    Others’ pain; others’ tears

    I try flying up again
    But some one doubts and tears me down
    It will never end this
    This ongoing cycle
    But now; now the rain comes again

    Pitter-patter, pitter-patter
    Boom; boom
    The rain comes again

    What joy the rain
    The certainty of thunder
    Of water; of light

    The light which forms the face
    The face of faithfulness
    The face of a giver
    Of a lover

    The face of a love
    That’s willing to cry
    Willing to die
    Here comes the rain again







    Submitted on 2006-05-18 18:31:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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