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Submission Name:
Subtle Gratitudes
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Author:
thepowerglider
Elite Ratio:
4.35 - 43/37/25
Words:
52
Class/Type:
Poetry/Friendship
Total Views:
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Average Vote:
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Description:
Subtle Gratitudes
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A moment of reflection
How can I help?
Turned inside out.
I ponder the smile
And the laughing eyes
You’ve said thank you,
But me . . .
I sigh a prayer of gratitude.
‘Tis you who’ve helped me.
Submitted on 2006-05-18 19:09:01
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Not bad at all, reminded me of "better to give than receive"
Maybe a touch more in the middle bit to open the story up to more possibilities, otherwise, nicely done.
be happy
Graeme
| Posted on 2006-05-18 00:00:00 | by
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