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    Author: BloodtornAngel
    ASL Info:    16/f/ hell
    Elite Ratio:    2.49 - 21/27/42
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 143
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       just a nightmare i had a while back with me and my ex


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    I spread my wings, and try to fly.
    Above the clouds, in the sky.
    But as i lift, my arms are caught.
    I'm brough back down, And then i thought.
    I saw you there, in front of me.
    Your forced to bow, I'm forced to see.
    I call to you desperatly,
    the rage in your eyes,When you look at me,
    I want to cry.
    I'm sorry that i caused this hate,
    this burning rage.
    And you say a sorry is much to late,
    That i need to turn the page.
    Your saying forget,
    I'm saying i won't.
    You told me to leave,
    I saying please don't say that,
    I love you.

    And then i wake.




    Submitted on 2006-05-18 21:34:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like this one. Did you write it while you were dating, or on the verge of breaking up? I could almost visualize it going on in my own daydream.

    "Your forced to bow, I'm forced to see."...I felt pain at this part, because you're being forced to watch someone you love fall apart.

    Nice ending, too.

    Scarlett
    | Posted on 2006-07-23 00:00:00 | by ScarlettFever | [ Reply to This ]
      Aww I love this poem. It reminds me of what happened to me and my fiance`.It was sad and very well writen.
    love hurts,
    mary
    | Posted on 2006-07-25 00:00:00 | by BloodyMary87 | [ Reply to This ]



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