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    dots Submission Name: "SummerJam06"(D-LAW)(sinceer diss)dots
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    Author: PROlifik
    ASL Info:    23/m/va
    Elite Ratio:    2.01 - 23/28/21
    Words: 845
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 655
    Average Vote:    1.0000
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       sinceer dissed me had to get em back haha

    another one from D-LAW


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    dots"SummerJam06"(D-LAW)(sinceer diss)dots
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    (D-LAW)
    you slipped up once,i gave you 5 BARS i let it go
    put you on probation now you choose to violate
    fucked up on coke look at his pupiles dialate as he lies wide awake
    now you left me with no choice but to retailiate
    your too fucked up to sleep so you try to go at me-man your in way to deep
    we all know i could murder you in my sleep,are styles are way to different we aint even on the same street
    you puttin all you got on paper over bone thugs beats,your a homo alone on that street you creep
    you need a thousand words- man this aint the +final chapter+this story has a thousand turns
    we barely threw chapter one an you already sayin you copped one when youve only dropped one
    sayin you won?-man i havent even dropped one so quit sayin you gonna pop one at the top-gun
    i might have only been here a week at most but i'll let you speak at my toast when my album sales approach the most we've ever seen on the east coast
    just be a man and ask me for a guest appearance and we can talk it over and clear this
    just be real with this your diss falls on deaf ears cuz no ones hearin shit
    poser diaries 3 wasnt even about ME -and i STILL responded at you- sayin you keepin a piece
    man i kick back sittin back just keepin the peace,you cant even keep track of everyone of your stipud diss-tracks,you the one walkin around with the "diss-me" sign on his back dont even front on that
    your just mad i slaid your campaign for you to claim your stakes of fame
    now you dissin everybody just tryin to spit some game,you +CHUMP+ change an wont change
    stop rappin wit out brains,im fresh out the chains- prolifik?-you saw what i did to him- i deliever pain- 2006?-its my reign-so start cuttin veins-your not insane your just full of way to much cocaine-your not the dope man your just full of dope man -with no hope man dont worry i'll help ya girl cope man- she prolly gonna help me cut ya throat man,damnnnn thats straight cut- throat fam,i cant believe i wrote that...DAMN,hahaaaaaaa
    ohhh and dont think yo- i didnt see your alter-ego-please ho-im like mobb deep with out prodigy-strictly "havoc" but we all confused engimatic or sinceer which ones the coke addict???but wait dont act all erattic-here i'll give you a bowl hit sit back and pack it you can even go head and put on one of your wack hits we will all be sure to cover our ears when ya track hits- haha,man im seein threw everyone of your tactics you fagget,give me my pad i'll auto-graph it- with my pen?- im auto-matic-im pyhsco -pathic-math-a-matic i just straight up have it wit rap shit so i dare you to blast shit...actually just let the master spit for just a lil bit
    "they shoooootin,ha-made you look"-just let the verse in my book fade to hook dont be affraid to look as i slay this crook-your excicution is open to the public and everyone is invited to see the "thug" bein indited due to flase statements he provided when both his "egos" collided my fans are too one-sided for our victorys to ever be divided- man it was over before it was even decided,who thought you would try to hold on to survival- unlike you- they been anticapatin my arrival,my fuckin site is like your fuckin bible all the fans know whos live-er ina cypher- i'll knife ya you just posing as the future like miki phifer,when it comes to talent im twice as nice as ya
    so keep lookin for that one lone victory that you seem to need so much but your fuckin wit me on this one so you straight outta luck,straight stuck off the talent i leave em amazed as fuck,you failing d-law 101 look at ya grades ya suck-just cuz ya fame's falling doesnt mean theres a need for the name calling


    (chorus-D-LAW)
    i still have the ability to rock it on any topic and you still couldnt top it
    you just cant stop it as i continue to drop shit i'll destroy ya poetry pop shit an all of your flop hits
    this game no longer needs you,so where in turn does that leave you?upset cuz these fans wont recieve you?
    dont be mad at them that no one believes you- they aint tryin to please you-they all saw your true colors beeld threw-get out the game thats what you need- to -do- so please do-leave dude -my past casualties will lead you
    so dont shed a tear for SINqueer or engifaggot just be happy im back at it spittin realer than some retired crack addict tryin to dust off records from his wack attic this aint 8 mile muthafucka you aint rabbit-i aint gonna let you dissin me come a bad habbit




    Submitted on 2006-05-19 03:53:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      hi, i love your battles with sinceer, you both real knock each other down, its amazing how you both keep picking urselves up again,
    i will b reading more.
    shae
    | Posted on 2006-05-19 00:00:00 | by shae_indauk | [ Reply to This ]
      ha ha, i cant wait to hear sins come back to this one, its gonna be hard to top it,
    keep um cummin
    kyrenia
    | Posted on 2006-05-19 00:00:00 | by secret kisses | [ Reply to This ]


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