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    dots Submission Name: My left Tibial Plateau Fracturedots
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    Author: CleoCollier
    ASL Info:    40/F/South
    Elite Ratio:    4.44 - 83/84/26
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
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       Damn this was a long time ago. Broken legs really give you lots of extra time to slow down & experience life differently, don't they? I better be done with forced hiatus like that-I've broken more bones than a lucky bull rider!
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    dotsMy left Tibial Plateau Fracturedots
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    Those friendly ladies,
    all were black
    (can I say that?)
    who'd let me bend an ear
    are gone now,
    and the unremitting loneliness
    is settling in.

    I ring Rebecca,
    she's my sitter
    saving grace,
    keeper of my precious boys-
    they're there now;
    and she can't talk for tending to
    their daily needs.

    For three long months,
    90 days, same as cash
    to ambulate or reach
    a dropped pen
    sometimes makes me
    sweat and strain or sob
    in frustration.




    Submitted on 2006-05-19 07:03:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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