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Submission Name: This song is called really heavy dots

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Author:	onebadsquirrel
Elite Ratio:	0.23 - 0/1/2
Words:	31

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
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This song is called really heavy dots

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My nuts are feeling sweaty
There sticking on my leg and
They are really heavy

I have an itch so itch
it bitch

Submitted on 2006-05-19 08:44:32 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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