[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav

  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav

    << | >>

    dots Submission Name: Don't Cut your Haredots

    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
    Total Views: 1030
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 464

       i don't know...there is a moral

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsDon't Cut your Haredots

    she would never know she'd been unkind
    would she come back the way she left, all her dreams died the day she cut her hair
    what lovely hair
    red and white
    and Hare
    and Hare
    and never there
    would there ever be there
    a Hare
    She would never return they say, till the leng was restored by there was a curse
    on her HAre
    and hair
    and hair
    and barely there
    was any hair

    Submitted on 2006-05-19 13:03:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!

    ||| Comments |||
      i didnt get it sorry?

    it is really unique from what i got

    | Posted on 2007-09-30 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]
      Okay, your red and lovely flower poem made more sense when you explained it to me...

    Maybe this would too.

    she would never know she'd been unkind
    would she come back the way she left, all her dreams died the day she cut her hair

    I really liked this...but I would like to know the connection between it and a rabbit...

    I am terribly confused.
    | Posted on 2006-05-22 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]
      This was an interesting poem. I didn't really understand it, but that doesn't mean anything about a poem. I was confused that you used to different spellings of the word hair. And the only definition of hare i know, is a rabbit. So that really confused me.

    I'd like to know the meaning behind this though. It left me wondering.
    | Posted on 2006-05-20 00:00:00 | by Dylan fan | [ Reply to This ]
      this whatof fun-n-games ../. again very tradtional form text an grammmer ../. i love this it brings a smell of joyest spring to my tounge ../. very good write "tab" ../. again i love your work as welll or even better then my own ..././.

    | Posted on 2006-07-17 00:00:00 | by Bloodstone | [ Reply to This ]

    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?


    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Tartarus written by endlessgame23
    Redemption written by poetotoe
    Shi written by ShyOne
    Across the bed written by expiring_touch
    Shut Up written by annie0888
    Vortex: The Imagination That Is written by KeeperOfLight
    The Old Mill written by Wolfwatching
    Physician, Heal Thyself written by WriteSomething
    Birds of a Feather written by poetotoe
    Cover written by saartha
    untitled written by ShyOne
    Angel Eyes written by poetotoe
    Delicious Stews written by elephantasia
    Carry written by saartha
    Dream written by closetpoet
    Still Perfectly Flawed written by armand
    Love written by saartha
    Florida's Autumn Solstice written by closetpoet
    Reliquary of Writ written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (1) written by endlessgame23
    mimicry written by expiring_touch
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (5) written by endlessgame23
    Etiquette written by saartha
    To the Devil and Candle written by HisNameIsNoMore
    The World written by jjd
    winners circle written by ShyOne
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (2) written by endlessgame23
    to Be like written by KeeperOfLight
    My Four Seasons written by faideddarkness
    More then just goodbye written by faideddarkness




    User Name:


    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]

    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]

    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]