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Another slit

Author: stormkrow
ASL Info:    24/ male / Montello Wi
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wrote this one today at school and now im in trouble cuz i am late for my next class
who gives a shit .

Another slit

another slit on my teenage wrist
people asking why
i 'll tell you why
too much pressure
from you ass holes to be normal
another slit on my wrist that is two now
the blood is starting to drip slowly
at first it'll get faster
the razor blade runs across my wrist like a figure skater on ice
another slit on my wrist that is three now
now i can feel the pain i 'm bleeding a little faster
that evil razor blade of mine it has me posessed
another slit on my scar covered wrist that is four now
this time it is differnt from any other night
my hand is numb normally that dosen't happen untill slit 96 but now bleeding too fast i can't stop it
for some reason i don't want to stop it
another slit on my blood covered wrist
my last chance to say my good byes
to the peopl that i love
but they don't love me
another slit who gives a shit ???

Submitted on 2006-05-19 13:49:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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I think that it is quite amazing and nothing but the truth. Kids slit their wrists everyday to try and control something and that something is the pain since the wrold tries to contorl our every move and our very breath maybe even our deaths. If we don't let them control us or shape us make us into what they want us to be they judge us and hurt us even shame us. Keep with the truth and you alone will survive this world this world of control.
~Fallen Eternal Dreamer~

at least my girlfriend has the "balls" to post something after she reads stuff!!!
| Posted on 2007-09-12 00:00:00 | by stormkrow | [ Reply to This ]

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