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    Author: intoxicated411
    ASL Info:    14/f/earth
    Elite Ratio:    2.38 - 45/60/28
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 118
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 445



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    She doesnt see
    Whats in her own face
    Instead she falls
    And loses her place.

    Theres marks on her skin
    But thats not where the pain begins.
    It starts with sin
    From her should be best friends
    That shouldnt be the best
    Because they are just like all the rest.

    In her bed she lies.
    All theyb do is lie.
    She checks her watch
    Its time to cry.




    Submitted on 2006-05-19 13:51:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This was a pretty well written poem. I can relate because I too was betrayed by a "best friend" Its the worst feeling in the world in the world isn't it?
    Keep up the awesome work..

    Basket Case
    | Posted on 2006-05-19 00:00:00 | by xpartyxninjax | [ Reply to This ]
      Pretty nice. I mean I don't really have set times to cry and nor do I think People should. But this is a nice write.


    Love Always,
    Megan


    SadSpanky
    | Posted on 2006-05-19 00:00:00 | by sadspanky | [ Reply to This ]



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