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    dots Submission Name: top of your xmas listdots
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    Author: secret kisses
    ASL Info:    22/f/uk
    Elite Ratio:    2.81 - 558/438/138
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
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    dotstop of your xmas listdots
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    place me on the top of your xmas list/
    i can make you heart melt with one soft kiss/
    no toy can out match me, i can go for hours/
    there is no batteries included, i wont break out in showers/ i will play with you, i aint no board game/ so write at the top of your list my name/ you will have me for life, you wont want to send me back/ im a good girl at heart, ill keep you on track/ i will keep you amused for hours on end/ all your mates will want me too, i will be the new trend/ so put away your basket ball and sega/ write on the list what you realy need, its called kyrenia.




    Submitted on 2006-05-19 14:04:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      awww. i think i wanna Kyrenia too now. this was really cool. kinda sensual but not too much. doesn't everybody wish they had a Kyrenia? u should have a commercial to advertise
    | Posted on 2006-05-21 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      wow, and we thought you were the angel out of us, it has been a long time though aint it ha ha, loved it its a long way off from xmas, but its good to be first ha ha
    love ya
    shae
    x x x
    | Posted on 2006-05-19 00:00:00 | by shae_indauk | [ Reply to This ]


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