this sounds almost lyrical... Here we are could be the next soundtrack to have, a little rewording, alot of restructering, and a coupleof monotonus, simple hooks... and the next ALanis was born!!!!!!!!! No seriously I like it and I think it really would be awesome as a song. As always you amaze me. Do ya thang, man ORA
muy bien... le gusto mucho. yo siempre queria escrbir una poema en espanol, pero no pude. In English: very good.... I like it a lot. I've always wanted to write a poem in Spanish, but I couldn't. Lol. I really do like this. just wondering: is that really how you say "not long ago"? would it possibly be "no have mucho tiempo". i dunno - something to think about. but, hey! you forgot the accents... lol. -dandan
you are a Spaniard in disguise ~ mucho romantico and bueno (my Spanish is way limited!) This I passed around at work and your a hit with the ladies (ok, 1 lady and some guys! That's all we have!) It is amazing as Oracle says, "as always" ahhh chaaa! Love, Peace, Joy!!!
no habla espanol! ok, muy poco....Very nicely done. This was flawless in form and flow. The one thing I didn't like was the dash in un-ending, after reading through the whole thing the dash was just a big ol' eyesore. unending is alright. Excellent work D.A.T