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    dots Submission Name: The broken heart song.dots
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    Author: intoxicated411
    ASL Info:    14/f/earth
    Elite Ratio:    2.38 - 45/60/28
    Words: 343
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 111
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2249



    Description:
       yeah.
    in the second half of this I got my inspiration from the book Luna.
    I love it.


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    dotsThe broken heart song.dots
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    5 broken heart ont he wall.
    Take one down
    Pass it around.

    4 broken hearts on the wall.
    4 broken people
    From 4 broken homes
    All live terrivly broken lives
    But yet no broken bones.

    The popular girl has the perfect cover.
    She will smile
    But only to look like the clones.
    Nobody would care if someone would ever love her.
    This girl with no parents to call her own.

    The boy sits in the back of the class.
    Draws in his notebook.
    Waiting for time to pass.
    Begging and pleading for the one
    To lower from his head, the gun
    That he keeps in a place you would never figure.
    Someday soon he will pull that trigger.

    This girl of only 15
    without her friends she'd give up her life.
    Her mother hits her
    Her fathers bitter
    The clouds in the sky resemble her eyes
    Every time its dark
    she reaches for friends
    They sing to her: "rain rain go away."
    They make it sunny for her every day.

    They call him fag
    They call him queer.
    He just wants their eyes to clear.
    He was born wrong.
    He was born a boy.
    Call it a defect.
    Don't call it a choice.

    He cant let himself out.
    He's dying inside.
    They'll never get it.
    He's dragged by the tide.

    He's dead inside
    They killed her..him
    Now he's killing the shell
    His spirit used to be in.

    He swallows the pills.
    How many pain killers
    Will it take to numb the ridicule?
    With his last breath
    He softly faces the truth
    And whispers to all of you
    "I'll never be the girl I was meant to be
    I'm a freak. An idiot. An anomolly."

    4 broken hearts on the wall
    Take one down
    Pass it around
    3 broken hearts on a very broken wall.
    All it takes is a little bit of pushing to fall.




















    Submitted on 2006-05-19 14:29:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This was a very well written poem. I especially like the part about the guy in the bakc of the class. Thats the one I can most relate to. The whole poem was awesome. Keep up the awesome work..

    Basket Case
    | Posted on 2006-05-19 00:00:00 | by xpartyxninjax | [ Reply to This ]
      I totally understand where your coming from, this made me feel so sad because i know others in the same situation. your very talented keep up the good work.
    | Posted on 2006-05-19 00:00:00 | by shanwinky | [ Reply to This ]
      wow this was really great, i know i'm going through something like this and if it weren't for friends i couldn't do it. joanna
    | Posted on 2006-05-19 00:00:00 | by heartless_ | [ Reply to This ]



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