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    dots Submission Name: Two-Way Reflectiondots
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    Author: Dimitri Kova
    ASL Info:    14/M/VA
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 36
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       This something I had to write for school. I had to create a poem like Emily Dickinson. If you don't know her style, it usually has a lot of hyphens. Well, comment!!


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    dotsTwo-Way Reflectiondots
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    Reminisce on the pasts that have left me wounded-
    The heartache- the numbness- utter depression-
    All of these- have left me scared;
    But they have brought up a new realization-
    Look foward- I got so far.




    Submitted on 2006-05-19 17:18:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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