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    dots Submission Name: silent knightdots
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    Author: shootingstar
    ASL Info:    22/f/hell
    Elite Ratio:    3.15 - 102/120/21
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
    Total Views: 2331
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 606



    Description:
       the title is totally irrelevant! my happy poem. ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha.


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    dotssilent knightdots
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    Spiral out of mind.
    bloody scars laugh,
    though suspicious ears know.
    the sound of defeated diamonds,
    silence the most hopeful echos.

    Break this tremor.
    vibrations in loneliness,
    and a world full of fear.

    Wrap your broken arms,
    around the neck of your captor.
    it knows too much.

    Rebellion from chains of solitude,
    to the safety of my sensless fortress.
    from the dizzy depths of my deception.

    falling endlessly, finding ecstacy
    reach the bottom,
    and dream.




    Submitted on 2004-05-11 12:04:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      falling endlessly, finding ecstacy
    reach the bottom,
    and dream.

    Love that. It's like..you're faling and you're afraid..but you end up finding what you desired all along. Whether that be happiness or who knows what, you found it...and then you reach the bottom, and instead of cold rock or some hideous thing like that, it's just a soft pillow for you to lie you head against! Bravo!
    | Posted on 2004-07-27 00:00:00 | by Shuurinakisame | [ Reply to This ]
      This is definately a Mind Stir. I don't know if I understand any of it (I'd like an explanation), but I enjoyed this immensely.
    I'll definately come back to this one.
    Thanx for the raspberry smoothie
    | Posted on 2004-05-21 00:00:00 | by nicelyJ | [ Reply to This ]


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