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    dots Submission Name: Like You'll Never Live Again.dots
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    Author: fallenpopcorn10
    ASL Info:    18/vagina/california
    Elite Ratio:    2.1 - 78/111/38
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
    Total Views: 952
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 549



    Description:
       Lol, idk. I wrote this during a time at my youth group. Feeling a little religous. Kinda what was going on. Idk, if just popped into my head. >.<


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    dotsLike You'll Never Live Again.dots
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    The still air ricochetying agaist the old, wood panneling.
    While simple cords are played on an ampless guitar.
    Bright hallogen lights, caged to the ceiling, and then neon green exit lights fill the room with light.
    Netless basketball hoops float in the air, yearning to be played with.
    Everything so silent, now that we're on our knees.
    Devoting our time to that man up above.
    Undefinable words are mumbled, with all our eyes closed.
    This time is to be valued, like you'll never live again.




    Submitted on 2006-05-19 19:13:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hey!! good job on this one! its a fav for me!! i noe a lot of ppl that dont take their religion seriously!! good job!
    ~akaila~
    | Posted on 2006-05-26 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ]


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