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    dots Submission Name: Freedom Fighterdots
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    Author: little_theif
    ASL Info:    20/F/Halifax
    Elite Ratio:    3.03 - 42/58/26
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 141
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 449



    Description:
       written in response to a lecture in one of my classes where we discussed security vs freedom where we looked at a number of instances in the united states and other countries where small freedoms like privacy are being infringed upon for greater security.


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    dotsFreedom Fighterdots
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    I will not give it to you
    My freedom
    It's mine, it can't be taken
    By you
    By him
    By anyone
    Not without a fight
    You'll have to prise it from
    Dead hands
    Mine
    I will not give it to you
    You'll have to win it
    Play my war game
    My fight
    I will fight for it
    Die for it
    I won't stand still
    While you take it from me




    Submitted on 2006-05-21 00:54:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This wasn't as great as your other two. I don't think it was that overall poetic. Rather, it seemed a lot like a bunch of quick statements written down in a hurry. I don't mean any of this to come of [censored]y, just trying to be helpful.


    Also, is this the right word...or even a word?
    'prise' maybe it should be pry?


    Lia
    | Posted on 2006-05-21 00:00:00 | by Glassy Eyed | [ Reply to This ]



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