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    dots Submission Name: expensivedots
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    Author: pioneerheart
    Elite Ratio:    4.6 - 190/178/112
    Words: 283
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Passion
    Total Views: 138
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       this is a lil song we did in covina once


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    dotsexpensivedots
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    oh, when we say those things
    I can't help but look at the lingering shadows of lights that dance through the room
    I say I feel a fool to fall in love with you
    It's just sometimes I don't know what to do
    Then you go and you give yourself away
    while I'm here wanting to forget about everything

    Chorus:
    It is what it is
    Don't spend your heart on this
    It is what it is
    You just don't recognize me
    It is what it is
    Besides the tower towards the sky
    It is what it is
    And, I'm okay

    This is not the same broken heart
    My dreams are somewhere trying help me along
    Not that I'm asking, not that I'm wrong
    Maybe you still believe that you could still could fool me (the same)
    And make me believe that this is everything
    That's not really necessary

    Chorus:
    It is what it is
    Don't spend your heart on this
    It is what it is
    You just don't recognize me
    It is what it is
    Besides the tower towards the sky
    It is what it is
    And, I'm okay

    Would you imagine that my cold heart won't
    know the difference; so hard to understand
    Two different hearts somewhere else
    Sound off the emptiness and its cost
    What a price to pay
    When I lost my way

    Bridge:
    So expensive ( and you say to her over & over again)
    I'm so sorry
    I'm so so sorry
    Oh, baby all I could say
    I'm so sorry
    So expensive ( and you say to her over & over again)









    Submitted on 2006-05-21 03:43:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      as i read this i was like, the flow here is strange, unique-
    and i noticed a chorus and duh! me- im assuming this is a song-
    very beautiful, many catch phrases i enjoy in this piece and i dont have any criticisms
    so good luck 2 u ooo & the title is fantastic!
    muchxoxoxoxoxo2u~danny
    | Posted on 2006-05-21 00:00:00 | by dannyshyboy | [ Reply to This ]



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