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    dots Submission Name: Rock & Roll Divadots
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    Author: DiamondTears
    ASL Info:    20/F/Wa
    Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 66/109/57
    Words: 104
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 1165
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 593



    Description:
       the story is a very small undertone, but I tried.


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    dotsRock & Roll Divadots
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    Theres a radio blaring on the bathroom sink,
    So I sing, and dance, like a diva to the beat,
    And I look in the mirror with sparkles on my eyes,
    And know these are nothing but sweet little lies,
    I want to be a glamor queen,
    Just to escape reality,
    But will this ever be?

    With sequences, glitter, stalettos, and a mike,
    All I can do is sing all night.
    Make my heart feel normal again,
    And my stomach do back flips from the lights,
    Cant you see I want to be a rock and roll diva,
    What ever that may meen.




    Submitted on 2006-05-22 01:11:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      the second easiest way to know who people are is by the way they act. In that way, I guess she is a rock and roll diva.- and I like the last line "whatever that may mean" best.
    -Vas
    | Posted on 2006-05-22 00:00:00 | by hey.you | [ Reply to This ]
      I really liked this piece it reminds me a little of my writing style so I totally added it to my favorites. I know what it is like to have the music in you and to live for it. My advice to you is sing whenever you can where ever you can... on a bus, in a car, in the mall. just do it
    | Posted on 2006-05-22 00:00:00 | by Thornful Rose | [ Reply to This ]
      Ooo I love this. I'm almost exactly the same way.
    I can relate to every line.
    I'm a dancing machine... and karaoke party time is time well spent.


    And you wrote this wonderfully.


    Very nicely done
    -nikkki
    | Posted on 2006-10-10 00:00:00 | by Liv2LoveThePain | [ Reply to This ]


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