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    dots Submission Name: lovedots
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    Author: Thornful Rose
    ASL Info:    23-female-California
    Elite Ratio:    3.74 - 141/186/49
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    I find new feelings deep within,
    past the previous temptations of sin.
    I now view life through unteared eyes,
    and wonder now how I ever cried.

    I know now freedom and what it brings,
    like the ability to surpass idle things.
    I have been released and asprung anew,
    I found love and some sort of faith plus truth.

    I once was oppressed by such silly things;
    like other people and what they think.
    But subtract the masses drugged at large,
    and find yourself being a true star.

    All you need is love in your heart like so many others have said,
    but the love I speak of is for you.
    And not intended for the one in your bed.




    Submitted on 2006-05-22 02:51:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This poem describes true love at its best. The way yoou show how it feels to be in someone's arms that u care about is simply marvoleous. Not many people can show how love can be when is true and you did so in this piece. good work

    jb
    | Posted on 2009-01-31 00:00:00 | by poet09 | [ Reply to This ]
      I absolutely love it. It show so much of the reality that a new love can heal many old scars and help the heart to recover from the tears once shed. defenitly adding it to my favorites.
    The Black Fairy
    | Posted on 2006-11-09 00:00:00 | by TheBlackFairy | [ Reply to This ]
      I love it! It's so true. Its almost funny that it seems so obvious in your poem but I took ages to learn that loving yourself is the greatest of all loves. It was beautifully written, really. I have to add it too my fav's. I LOVE IT!

    *Dani
    | Posted on 2006-05-22 00:00:00 | by firefoxvixen | [ Reply to This ]


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