Hmm. I don't have a clue what was going through your mind, but I do like the poem regardless. It flows very well, and the rhyming does not seemed forced. That is a hard task to accomplish. At first it sounds like you could be talking about love, and Heaven being with the person whom you love. But then you find out that it all was just a fantasy, and you become disappointed. I don't understand how th end could really fit in with my theory, and I am probably completely wrong, but hey, I tried. :D Good luck on figuring everything out. LeAnna