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    dots Submission Name: Dark Imagerydots

    Author: rmocruz
    ASL Info:    57/male/Derby,CT
    Elite Ratio:    2.04 - 11/26/25
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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       Cynical and Sarcastic

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    dotsDark Imagerydots

    The battle begins inherent at birth
    establish your sins, appraise your worth
    Whether given to chance, or be it so planned
    perhaps in the end we shall understand
    Sun is to day as is darkness to night
    there can be no shadow without the light
    A necessary contrast to all we covet
    we attempt to live it but need not love it
    Knowing two sides exist to every story
    we hide our shame then show our glory
    Enter with soul so young and healthy
    pursue the goal, grow old and wealthy
    To obey the rules we all must swallow
    we choose the fools of which to follow
    Fearing only that the truth be known
    worship the flesh to then bury the bone
    Upon sacred ground we don our flower
    prepared to answer to a higher power

    Submitted on 2006-05-22 11:04:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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