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    dots Submission Name: Desert Rosedots

    Author: Magnolia Steele
    ASL Info:    30/female/Northwest CA
    Elite Ratio:    4.71 - 2492/1825/232
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
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       This is for my friend Cat. I have come to know her and this is how I see her. A delicate flower in the desert and capable of enduring almost anything. She is a survivor. This is for you Cat, I love you.

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    dotsDesert Rosedots

    You're still here
    because you know
    how to survive
    the impossible
    being that you are wedged
    between a few rocks
    and a dry hard place,
    even still, you have
    taken root and bloomed
    despite what others may feel
    you seem to lack to endure;
    A sand storm could not
    cloud the vision of any
    who have come to know
    how beautiful you are.

    Submitted on 2006-05-22 11:22:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i love how you have yoused carecteristigs of a flower fow what this person is going through great read and exelent write.
    | Posted on 2006-09-12 00:00:00 | by lili | [ Reply to This ]
      A sweet dedication. I liked how, in such few words, you managed to share with us so many of your dear friend's qualitlies. A good way to show how much you admire her.

    Give yourself and Cat my love

    | Posted on 2006-05-23 00:00:00 | by abuzzbuzz92 | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice tribute Mags, to an obviously close friend.
    I have had the chance to read some of Cat's work and have exchange some amount of dialog and from the little I have gathered, she seemed like a very nice person.

    I enjoyed this Maggie, though I think you should remove the caps Mags. Cat tends to prefer to write common letters (not like you don't already know that...lol)

    And also that maybe you could change the last line, something more along the lines of

    'how beautiful you truly are.'

    That sounded a bit better but thats only a suggestion. Anyway, great write.

    Keep it up
    and take care

    | Posted on 2006-05-23 00:00:00 | by Departed One | [ Reply to This ]
      This is so sweet, I adore it. This Cat must be a wonderful person, and people like that are so hard to find. I like the metaphor of being like a flower, I think it works really well. Wonderful.

    | Posted on 2006-05-22 00:00:00 | by Anticlownperson | [ Reply to This ]
      oh Trina, you've made me cry.. this is just beautiful and i'm at a loss for words.. you are a wonderful person, and i feel blessed to have you in my life, even though i've never seen you! i am humbled by this, my friend.
    when i'm feeling down, i will read this again and again, for it comes from such a beautiful heart to a friend who's seen some rough times.

    you are a gift, Catlady. thank you from the bottom of my heart.

    | Posted on 2006-05-22 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      Well...Magnifigato personified eh?
    I think you hit the bucket right on the nail!
    (Did I say that right?)
    Maybe you had all your eggs in one pudding.
    (Is that correct?)

    I dunno...but if I was asked to write something to my good writer friend Cat...it would definately be one of those algebraic equations where
    T + D = Magnifigato

    She is more powerful than she leads us to see...but we do see it...doo-deep-doo-dee-doo-doo....cant fool us forever Cat.

    Nice job "other Cat"

    | Posted on 2006-05-22 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
    This is simply Beautiful
    Your Friend is so gifted to have you in her Life
    But I know you feel more gifted for having her in your Life
    You are a very special person Maggie as you continually bring Love to Others
    I For One Thank God Every Day for bringing us together as Friends
    God Bless
    Your Friend Always
    | Posted on 2006-05-22 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      Very interesting and sweet write, maggie.
    The comparison.. a desert rose.. indeed is a survivor.. even with all the circumstances still able to bloom. That is something/ someone to admire, I bet.
    Of all the words you used, I liked the last one most:

    A sand storm could not
    cloud the vision of any
    who have come to know
    how beautiful you are.

    Clear that she means a lot to you but i think she must be glad to have a good friend like you, as well.

    | Posted on 2006-05-22 00:00:00 | by Darth Zeus | [ Reply to This ]
      this is cool.

    A sand storm could not
    cloud the vision of any
    who have come to know
    how beautiful you are.

    those were my favorite lines. this person has to be strong indeed to prosper in such a hostile environment. is it a coincidence that both of ur names start with the same three letters?


    | Posted on 2006-06-18 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]

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