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    dots Submission Name: A King Worth Killingdots
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    Author: xaos
    Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 34/54/49
    Words: 1079
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 78
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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       I know its lengthy, but length of a poem shouldnt be what makes it good or bad..atleast to me anyways.


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    dotsA King Worth Killingdots
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    Under that black top hat
    Stitched within its barers
    Cause rests Uncle Tom,
    And a delightful game
    Of ring around the rosy
    Meets the ashes of
    What's to come while
    All the kids fall back,
    As they watch Rosa
    Run in circles looking
    For the head of the pack.

    Then he stood, a foot in the grave
    as they gave the tipping point
    a blunt wrapped in those ashes.
    I smoked the bones of the land
    and braved to go on the brim,
    as niggers splintered the thin
    lumber and Black Jack Johnson
    turned limbs towards the kids;
    calling "timber!" until white men
    went limp, in the heat of summer.

    Coreta's in the corner,
    Making Martin's death bed,
    As the sheets get caught
    In that stubborn old birch tree,
    While the willows trembled
    And their passionate tears
    Burn two holes through
    These thin covers of purity,
    Before they go opaque
    And twist their corners in
    To hug her screaming throat.

    We came engraved on stumps
    from the cherry tree that was
    chopped down, which became
    our coffin as drops of resin
    incased our tasteless eye.
    The golden apple was stolen
    from the hands holding time.
    Washington watched them
    enter the garden and pick
    leaves from the money tree,
    that brought dead presidents
    crumbling to their knees.
    So sit at the head of my table
    and tell me of the minorities
    who's basket came back empty.
    Then reach for the blood sun
    with the rope between the dirty
    leaves where poverty is hung.

    Monotony sowed it's seed
    when stores showed how deep
    we breath into hollow roots.
    We wore shirts that spoke volumes
    to listeners that were mute.
    They clothed our hatred and
    naked, undressed resentment,
    that loathed complacent truth.
    We all followed suit, soon enough.
    We all supported it, sporting outfits
    from innocent fists of infants
    gone missing under wheel barrows;
    carrying deals scandals materialized
    to hide narrow wrists peeling proof.

    Mississippi state of mind;
    Paths are being blazed,
    As Fredrick Douglas
    Leads a train of thought
    Underground, directly
    Through the grave.
    Meet at the safe house,
    But mind the barbed wire.
    The plantation stands
    As the sun's eclipsed
    And each step leaves
    An asphalt highway.

    Roads are overgrown hospitals
    since we sold peace by the kilo
    to those homes in the ghetto;
    knowing young ones loved fame,
    wanting to snort the light, but it
    distorted the bright faced horizon
    into sporadic afternoons, where the
    moon shine quietly made life frightful
    of black men that had broken bottles,
    but their guns cast no shadows.

    Hear the dogs bleed
    Their hungering screams
    Into the dense air,
    As Jesus yanks the collar
    So hard that a spark
    Is born in dry atmosphere,
    While the darkness
    Watches from between
    Gaps in the forrest's fingers,
    Before the flame
    Dances up the arms
    Of a quivering evergreen.

    The two thick trunks burn
    Steady until all their limbs
    Have been singed off
    And all that remains
    Is a charred may pole,
    As Jesus starts dancing
    Hand in hand with ignorance,
    Before the polls falter;
    Land crossed on the ground,
    As embers light their pride.
    And as all these new
    Constellations fall from
    The rippling skies,
    Jesus opens his eyes;
    Falls upon God's lost cross,
    Into his transfixed crucifixion
    And begins to cry.

    ... And there, Betsy Ross
    Sits on her colonial porch
    Watching it all happen.
    Gazing threw the spaces
    Of the railing she watches
    Every black man there
    Trapped between the bars
    Of that white picket fence;
    Then tilts her heavy head
    Down and continues sewing.
    As the needle of that syringe
    Cracks her ivory thimble,
    As all seven red stripes
    Began to bleed away,
    Leaving a clean white
    Page To fly at half mast.

    This past is nobody's flag that is
    flown over the rags of epitaphs.
    Our plague is on parade and we
    walk with crooked swags that
    are gladly bound and gagged.
    Who will praise this symbol if
    it's raised with simple prejudice
    for the thimble and the thread
    as we dragged our feet with bliss?
    They proclaim to wave proud
    and brag about names mentioned,
    being ashamed of the attention
    willing to make them a famous
    nation, over a king worth killing.

    Continue to pace crab
    Grass and broken shards
    Of that stained glass
    Window that decided to
    Kiss the blarney stone.
    As the windows opened,
    The fog ran in, then
    Tiptoed over every note
    And began to dance...
    Hand in hand, toe to toe;
    Jesus was romanced.

    The music led; fog followed;
    As the choir stood in awe
    And watched the swallows.
    They just stood there,
    Providing the soundtrack
    To the last site of equality...
    Before the fog became
    Tangled in threads of sanity.
    Faster the two twirled about;
    Thread growing titer around
    The Minister's cold throat
    As the two continue to dance;
    Following the orchestrators
    Hands before he raises them...
    As the noose tightens,
    And Malcolm wears an "X"
    Over each eye lid...
    As he dies on a high note.

    Likewise, when Martin Luther
    realized how steep the steps
    where inside each steeple,
    he cried, "When I die...
    I'll scribe my Alibi in metal.
    Tell me if there's life above
    what we call good and evil!
    Why should people fight while
    time passes away our rights?"

    I've tried to turn the knob,
    I've tried to knock on the doors
    with the force of praying hands.
    But this neutral lock the Smiths
    picked to hold the broken pieces
    of people's complete soul can't
    fit through the key-whole...

    The church clears,
    The screaming spectators
    Disperse through the
    Various halls to find an exit,
    While with ever ear piercing
    Screech Malcolm lifts
    Farther into the darkness
    Of the cathedral rafters.

    Join us here, after the
    dead letters are opened
    again, and the spine of
    the Bible breaks under
    the devil's pen.
    He's drawn blood,
    while we've foregone awe
    to wonder if dawn will come.
    All it spawned was sons,
    that our daughters saw shunned
    to fields dreamed in cotton.

    But, there's a straggler.
    Harriet has lost her way;
    Stumbling through the halls.
    It seams the walls have eyes,
    They see all, and judge more.
    She stop dead, reached a fork
    In the cavernous hallways,

    To the right she gazed
    Into the light at the end of
    The tunnel, before she turned...
    Looked quick then ran left
    As she disappeared........
    ............ Into the darkness.




    Submitted on 2006-05-22 12:47:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow. This was definitly long, but amazing. I really loved it.

    The whole idea of our prejudices condemning us...it's just so wow. Please tell me if I got that right or not.

    In a few places, towards the beginning, it seemed like you would drift off only to return to the place where you'd started.

    Maybe you should go back and read this out loud to yourself, or have someone else read it outloud to you. Mainly, because, I think there's a lot of unnecessary words used here, even maybe stanzas.

    Mostly towards the beginning this poem was confusing. I didn't really understand what you were talking about, until I reached one stanza,

    "This past is nobody's flag that is
    flown over the rags of epitaphs.
    Our plague is on parade and we
    walk with crooked swags that
    are gladly bound and gagged.
    Who will praise this symbol if
    it's raised with simple prejudice
    for the thimble and the thread
    as we dragged our feet with bliss?
    They proclaim to wave proud
    and brag about names mentioned,
    being ashamed of the attention
    willing to make them a famous
    nation, over a king worth killing."


    That stanza really helped pull the piece together for me, and made it more understandable.


    Nice job, this was great if not long:)

    Lia
    | Posted on 2006-05-22 00:00:00 | by Glassy Eyed | [ Reply to This ]



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