Description: It is all about a friend of mine who talked to me about his old memories and it is real that everybody think him to be the happiest man, but I saw his inner soul so I wrote this poem ( He is suffering but no one can notice it, he is trying to keep his memories to himself only but I have successed to make him talk about it )..... I hope you will all enjoy it and I will be happy if you show me the parts in which I have mistakes.
A Story Of A Man -------------------------------------------
That old, cheerful man ....
The first time you look at him
you will think that he is the
happiest man on the whole
earth.. Talking to him about
my love took him back to his
old memories and his first
love and how he loved her
so dearly and the times
he spent with her and their
little wishes and hopes
for being together for the
rest of their life....
He remembered how they
both failed in the challenge
of keeping their love alive
and be always together...
For some reasons he prefered
to keep for himself and said
" All I know that we could not
do it " that moment he could
not resist that feeling of sadness
which fill his prisoned heart...
And tears begin to get down
his eyes like a day of heavy rains..
He was so tired of talking about it
Before he leave me he advised me
saying " Love is great and one
should enjoy and taste that
wonderful and splendid feeling,
One should do his best to keep
his love alive and breathing"
With tearful eyes he said " I'll
pray for you and for every two
lovers to be always together "
What a poem. It is so lovely. I am speechless dear. I simply love it. I really touch’s my heart. Love for me is the reason why some of us are alive. For me I live for love. I consider myself to be one of the happiest persons on this earth, cuz I have experienced love.
"Love is poverty that makes one rich"
I read this a few days ago in a book from an Arabic writer called Rafiq Shami and I think his words are very true. Back to your poem, it is your best piece well done again With love your shabnam
every man has its grief and it was the pain of love in his case , I like the way that even thought he was hurt by love he advised to hold on to it and prayed for lovers , it’s a touching story , shows the human nature that hides the pain behind a fake smile .
This is a very deep write This write almost has a mystical feel to it I feel like the old wise man was actually like a saint who only wished to spread his knowledge and love so others may move forward in life I rea;;y like the way you wrote this Like a fable in poetic sense Great Job God Bless Ron
This has me thinking...does love abandon people or do people get abandon love. In my experience i have seen that love (in any capacity) reveals the true nature of people. The advice your friend shared with you is truly valuable: love is a sensation that we feel but at times fail to fully experience with our whole being. Unfortuantely we only get to this realisation once love has left us behind because we didnt give it enough recognition
Submission Name: A Story Of A Man
